I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday 19 September 2018
The Blue Pill
Blue Pill...
Characters: Mr. Chocolate: Dad, Mrs. Chocolate: Mum, Bubblegum: Daughter, Skittles: Son
Alright kids we’re almost at Candy Woods “ Says Mrs. Chocolate ” Yay!! “ Says Skittles and Bubblegum “ Whos excited! “ Says Mr. Chocolate “ Umm duh, We are! “ Says Skittles and Bubblegum “ Alrighty, We’re here. “ Says Mrs. Chocolate “ Now let's go start exploring “ Says Skittles “ Alright you go explore I am gonna go to the beach and explore for Sea Shells “ Says Bubblegum “ Ok kids go have fun me and Dad are gonna set up a picnic for when you two come back! “ Says Mrs. Chocolate “ Ok Mum cya later! “ Says Skittles “ Bye Mum and Dad “ Oh I found a spider! “ Says Skittles to himself “ Ok I am gonna go head back now “ Says Bubblegum to herself “ Hi Mum i’m back! “ Says Bubblegum “ Wait where's Skittles “ Says Mr. Chocolate “ Uhh I don’t know? “ Says Bubblegum “ Skittles!! Where are you? “ Says Mrs. Chocolate “ Wait a second, Where am I? “ Says Skittles “ Ouch, uhh I feel dizzy, really dizzy “ Says Skittles“ Wake up! “Says a Wolf” Huh! “Says Skittles” Are you lost? “Says the Wolf” Yes “Says Skittles” Here take this pill it will help you find your way back to your family. “Says the Wold” Ok, Thanks “Says Skittles” Mum, Dad Bubblegum!!! “Says Skittles” Wait I can hear Skittles! “Says Bubblegum” Let’s go find him! “Says Mr. Chocolate” Skittles! “Says Mrs. Chocolate” Mum! “Says Skittles” Wait I can see him, Over here! “Says Bubblegum” Skittles there you are! “Says Mrs. Chocolate” Mum, Dad Bubblegum I missed you “Says Skittles” We missed you too “Says Mrs. Chocolate” Ok Kids it's been a long day it’s time to go to bed. “Says Mr. Chocolate” Ok “Says Skittles and Bubblegum” Night Dad, Night Mum “Says Skittles and Bubblegum” Night kids “Says Mrs. Chocolate and Mr. Chocolate. Skittles was found and everyone had a great time.
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Hi Mya I'm Chloe from Wigram Primary school. The strong aspect of your work is the piece of your writing work. Next time maybe you could put an enter space for a new line when you write the charters in a story. This makes me think of reading something similar like a book I have at home.
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