Vanilla Ice Cream, Please!
For W2 our passage is "Vanilla Ice Cream, Please!" One of our main tasks was to create a Information web. I used mindmup to make my Information web. I had to add all the facts we knew from the story.
The main character of our story is a girl from Tongatapu named Veisinia Veikoso. She loves ice cream.
My Information web:
I found it hard to find facts because to me the story was confusing
and it was hard to put in facts that made sense.
Something I found easy was to get just enough facts,
so I didn't have too little facts.
Hi Mya! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Mya! that Mindmup looks really cool! I didn't know anything about making vanilla ice cream!!
I, don't know what a mindmup is. It looks like a website.
Next time, you could try to give us more information about the background on why you did this. Like, why were you reading this story?
What is mindmup? How do you use it?
From Hana
Hey Mya, I really like how you added like lots of detail about like where you put the beans after you pick them and like you said the place called Nuku'alofa. Next time I think you could add some more information about how like the beans can be turned into Vanilla Ice cream!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeletethis mindmup is really good you added alot of facts about vanilla ice cream, I fogot to put in that it could make shampoo and cake and stuff like that, maybe next tie you could tell people what a mindmup is so they will know.
but overall it was great, good job Mya
Ella 😊
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteI like how you set up your mindmup and you gave a lot of information. Also you gave us new facts especially ones who don't know about the vanilla beans.
Maybe you can give us questions to go back and see if we were really reading!
Good job Mya!🐖🐷
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used a lot of detail on how to make Vanilla Ice Cream.
I used a google drawing to make my one. It was kinda hard to make it.
Next time could you use more information please.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Kia ora,I am Mykiala from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing.
Why did you share this.
Did you think about tell us more about it.
Great job.
Mykiala YMS