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Tuesday 3 December 2019

Ewes for Me | Synthesis | 3-12 -19

WALT Design a new improved milking shed for automatically milking sheep. 
(Use drawings and labels to explain your interesting ideas)


For reading this week, my groups book is called Ewes for Me. It's about these people who can't eat, so they have to eat liquid food through tubes. But this boy can't eat certain food, only milk from these sheep, Friesian sheep. In the story there's 15 sheep. So they milk all of them, to produce enough milk for the kids that can't eat the other liquid foods. 

Our task for Synthesis was to create a new and improved milking stations that automatically milks the sheep. I drew a ramp shed, where they can wait. And the tube automatically milk the sheep, when a sheep is on the tube. I added labels to explain it more.


Here's my thing I made:


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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 December 2019 at 10:14

    Hey Mya! I really like how you added labels to show what it was and you told us what it does, I also really like how you added multiple sheeps so then we could like get into it more. This made me think about if this would be the perfect milking shed! (Cause your's looks better that mine! Maybe you could try and make it look like more in order.

    Good job on the rest though!

    - Kylie

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    1. Anonymous4 December 2019 at 10:22

      Hi Kylie!!

      Thank you for the comment. I deffintly should make it in order, it looks a bit confusing. And yours is great, I commented on yours :)

      - Mya

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  2. Anonymous4 December 2019 at 10:24

    Hey Mya,
    Your blog post is really good I really like how you added label so if people didn't understand they would know. I also like how you put information about the text and the task so people understood the thing you are making. It isalso good because you put the W.A.L.T in.
    Maybe next time you could take a new photo because it is hard to see the task, because the lighting is dark and hard to see
    But oveall it is really good, good job Mya
    Ella-😉

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  3. Anonymous4 December 2019 at 10:25

    Hi Mya! Love the way you showed us your idea and showing us the labels. Next time you could put it on a google drawing since I couldn't see properly and it is quite blurry. Good job!
    Keep it up
    - Zipporah

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  4. Anonymous4 December 2019 at 10:25

    Hey Mya,

    This is a real smart idea, I like how you have a lot of information and detail.

    The one I made was digital and similar to what it originally looks like.

    Next time maybe you could do it digitally.

    How did you get the idea?

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