One of our tasks for reading was to make a helpful machine for our passage. Our passage is Sniffer Dog. It's about a Beagle that is a sniffer dog. Most people don't expect Beagle's to be sniffer dogs. His name is Isaak and he loves his sniffing job. The workers say it's like working with a 3-year old because they have to enjoy what they're doing because if they don't, they won't do it.
So for my machine I kinda did a poster. I added my example/picture of the machine and a bit of writing to explain what it is. There is some wrong spelling on this poster, but I tried to fix it. I ended up changing one of the words that were right because I thought it was wrong.
My Poster:
Hey Mya,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used paper to make the poster.
I used a google drawing to make my one.
Next time could you make the writing easier to read. Maybe a bit bigger.
Hi Tyler!
DeleteThanks for the feedback, it actually helps :)
Yes I find it easier to use paper for my poster, it's just I can add what I want and be more imaginative.
I will make the writing easier to read. I noticed myself that I couldn't see the writing very well.
Next time I may do a poster on my device instead of doing it on paper.
-Mya :)
Thank you
Hey Mya, I am Olivia Form Yaldhurst Model School I loved your machine .In my class we have done that where we make a machine and tell them about or machine and how it works. With your picture I could not really read it so maybe do it on your chromebook because it would not be so blurry or not very smudge in the writing and i couldn't see the words well . WHy did you choose to do it on Paper?.
ReplyDelete(:Kind Regards:) from Olivia.
Hi Olivia.
DeleteThanks for the feedback and the compliments about my poster :)
Yes I know people can't see it well, but I tried haha. I will next time probably use my device to make the writing easier to see so I don't have to take a photo of my poster etc.
A: I choose paper because, I find it easier and I can be more imaginative.
Thank you
- Mya
Hi Mya,
ReplyDeleteI like how put yours on paper and how you added pictures and example on what will happen I would have never thought of making it on paper, maybe next time you could make the picture a little more clearer because it is a litttle hard to see the writing.
But overall you did really good, good job
Hi Ellaaa!
DeleteThank you thank you! The feedback helps.
Yeah everyone's been saying that, but next time I will do it on my device so you can see the writing easier. And so I won't have to take a photo of it etc.
- Mya :)
Kia ora, I,m Max form Yaldhurst Model School. The part I enjoyed was when you said abotu sniffer dogs becaseu I don,t kno abotu them. Did you think botu saying what sniffer dogs are. Nex tiem you could say what sniffer dogs are. Wh did you decide to do the passage abotu Sniffere Dogs. Goodbye from Max.
ReplyDeleteHey Mya, I am Lucy from Yaldurst model school. I like this blog because you explain EVERYTHING. I have noticed with some of your blog posts they go out of the blog into your backdrop. Do you like blogging? I do. I like it also it is cool and fun to read and intristing (Sorry I don't know how to spell it). Overall I love this blog post. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteKind Regards
From Lucy