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Wednesday 16 October 2019

Return Ticket, Please! T4W1 Reading

In Term 4 I've moved up a group, I'm in Danny now. But one of our reading tasks for this week was to create a information web. I used mindmup to make mine. I added all the information and facts I got from our story, our reading story this week was called Return Ticket, Please! It was also a non-fiction text. It told us about alot of intresting things about Mars, Venus and the Moon. One of the facts I thought was intresting was that the United States, are working with other countries, is planning a new mission to Mars by the year 2020. 

 My mindmup:
I found it hard to pick up information from our story and try write it in my own words as well as making it relate to the actual fact that it was. 

 What I found easy was to set it out and make sure it had enough information.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 10:51

    Hey Mya, I really liked how you added like lots of information and like you weren't lazy to add as much as you want and you didn't just add 3 things but you added like all that you knew so great job!

    I think you could like add maybe a simile on the one that says "Venus is 30 million km away from Earth" so like maybe do a simile to like compare.

    But overall you did really good!

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  2. Anonymous17 October 2019 at 10:34

    Hey hey Mya!

    I really like your information web. You have added lots of information about Mars and Why people are going there. Also like the way you use different words.

    Maybe next time you can ask questions and check your spelling a bit. I only see one problem but I got mixed up.

    Anyways Good job Mya! Keep your Good work up🐖

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  3. Anonymous17 October 2019 at 10:45

    Hi Mya,
    I really like your information web, because you added alot of detail and you made it make sense because you didn't put facts that were not about something weird and how you added alot of facts this is good.
    maybe next time you could look at your spelling like Zipporah said
    Q was this whole thing hard to do our was it easy

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