The Homesick Weightlifter - Story Book - Collaborative writing
In class we've been doing Collaborative writing. I was in a group with two other people. We had a topic of, The Homesick Weightlifter. We had to get all our ideas and writing together.
My group first got all our ideas and wrote them down by planning on a shared slideshow. Then we put all our ideas together to make our writing into a digital picture book. There were templates we could use or we could make our own. My group made our own basically because we started with one of the templates but ended up changing everything.
We found it hard to work all as a group because we all had different ideas that were all cool. I think my group found it easy to get ideas but not choose ideas.
Here is my groups collaborative writing:
I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday 12 September 2019
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Kia Ora I´m Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI love your animation because it wasn't to long or short.
I like that you put what the moral of the story was.
Maybe you could put some more charters in the animation.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)