The 5k Run

In Room 5 Mrs Lee (My teacher) had put up a picture for us to write about. She put words up there, See, Smell, Hear, Taste and Touch. She said that we have to write about the 5 sences but make it a story at the same time. I was confused how to do the 5 senses but then I actually made a story with the 5 senses.

She gave us a few minutes to think about what we're gonna write about.

Then we went to our desks and started putting all our ideas into a piece of writing. I tried to think of the creativeness and descriptive words to put in. So I started my writing.

I finished writing my story pretty quickly. So Mrs Lee got me to pair up with someone and check our writing together. Then once I finished editing with the person I was with, Mrs Lee read out my buddy first paragraph. Which was very creative.

If you wanna read my writing, here it is.

The 5k Run

Five more steps!! And I made it. The top of the mountain.

I’m at the top of the mountain. I can smell this wonderful cold mint breeze from the trees. I’ve never smelt this fresh mint air before. I better stretch, my legs are killing me. But this cold mint smell is too good of a smell! 

I better sit down and take a breath. Wow what a beautiful view. I can see everything from here! The clouds, the city, the waves in the ocean and everything else am that you could imagine. I better take a photo of this view. This photo is a saver.

I can taste that cold mint smell! It’s too good to resist. It tastes like mint, but really I have no mints! I went up to a tree, and the cold mint smell breezed into my mouth. But now I'm just starting to taste the smell of a nice cold mint smell and a dirt smell, which smells quite odd.

I am sitting down. I can feel the rocky mountain. I can feel the wind breeze on my skin, it’s like the clouds are touching floating along my skin. I can feel the leaves on the trees brushing against my skin. When I look at the view, I can feel the victory of the 5k walk.

I can hear the nice breeze that’s swishing against my ears. I can hear birds chirping away way up in the trees. I can hear the leaves brushing against the branches of the trees. I can hear waves far away from the ocean. I can hear people at the bottom of the mountain cheering for other people that are almost at the top like us.

Well this 5k run was definitely worth this view.