In reading we have a new reading task instead of the shared slideshow, but it's similar to the shared slideshow. For this weeks task we had to make a Mindmup. Once we made our mindmup, we had to post it to our blog. Then comment on our people in our groups mindmup. Sophie's(My group) reading passage today was "Elephant Whisperer." It's about a girl called Charlotte who loved elephants, they were her favourite animal. Our passage was fictional.
Here is my mindmup:
I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday 12 September 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Mya, I like how you added the, setting, character, feelings, problem, action and outcome! But maybe next time you could add more information for the setting, problem and outcome. And maybe for the characters; for Samba maybe you could add more information about him.
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