In class we had a fun writing task. We were in groups and we had a character, place and a problem. My group had our character which was a penguin!! Our setting was a dessert and our problem was siblings. We had to get our planning which was tricky and confusing. After we had all the planning and information
Here is my groups writing..
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Saturday 31 August 2019
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Hi Mya i'm Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteWhat group were you in like 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6. What was the character was it and I now it was in the slide but we can know what it is on the blog to. Inspired of putting names you can put it with the character.
Michaela