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Thursday 15 November 2018

The Courageous Party!

The Courageous Party!

Once Upon A Time their lived 3 Sisters names Fritzi, Mitzi and Lulu. Fritzi and Mitzi are twin sisters, Lulu is their older step mean sister. Fritzi and Mitzi's Mum died when they were 2 years old. Lulu went to Camp Sisterhood and they introduced them self. Lulu did not like Sisterhood Camp. Lulu saw a baby carrier in a random bush.

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous15 November 2018 at 14:20

    HI Mya I like how you ended it with a dramatic ending. You put lots of detail in what you have. Lastly check your wording past present or future? I saw ARE instead of were if that was you wording.
    By Grace.

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